-you are going to want to create a section that follows up your last sentence and discusses the new strategic action plans out theree
The many resources there are for them to benefit from are not always enough because their number enlarges as the days go by. These people deserve a chance to overcome their present reality.
-here you say that the plans aren't enough which means not only do you need to explain the plans but then also create a section that shows why they aren't enough
People like John from "stories from the streets" deserve a helping hand that makes them feel appreciated and valuable as human beings they are.
-remember your audience doesn't know who John is. Also you don't even write about him you just mention him in a single sentence. If you are going to mention him that make his story have a purpose and develop it
I do not think a person that is now homeless chose to become a homeless. some obstacles are greater than others and unfortunately sometimes the resources are smaller or lesser than the motive. Everyone should be able to have and afford a place to stay in and nobody should starve in a country where there is abundance. Homelessness should be extinct.
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