image on homeless people "Stories From The Street"

When I was done watching "Stories From The Street", It changed the way I look at homeless people. Know one knows what has happened to them in life. For example John from "Stories From The Street". he is a veteran and he is homeless. because he has been through some much things and pain, but besides all of that he has managed to be happy and have a smile on his face. 
-here you mention how John's story changed your perspective so this begs for a little more info such as 1) what was your perspective before and why was it that and 2) you are going to want to develop and detail his story much more for your final article if you are mentioning him as an example of someone who makes you rethink homeless stereoyptes
- the paragraph below this begins to talk about negative homeless stereotypes- I can see that section going before this paragraph since you watching John's story changed your mind about the stereotypes and yet your audience doesn't know what those are quite yet 

We look at homeless look people lazy, dirty, lack of education, stupid, no manners, etc.But honestly we cant judge them without knowing there story and even if we knew what happened to them we are know one to judge other people because  we are not perfect.
-here you have a section on homeless stereotypes
- develop this more and give examples (you mention yourself as an example of how negative representations can effect the way we feel and interact with the homeless)
- where do stereotypes of negative representations of the homeless come from, why are they still around, how true are they, etc. 
I have thought for many year so much negative things about homeless people , but when my family and I joined a group to help people that don't have much . I learned that everyone has a story some more painful and some because of addictions. The group am in goes to different places of Mexico, and we talk to homeless and we give them clothes and things to be clean and sanitary.

Has John said he only needs a smile , he doesn't want petty or anything else. He believes in God and he has so much more manners the people who have a lot more things then him. He doesn't like to sleep in the way of the citizens sidewalk. He sleeps on one side and the other side he makes sure he doesn't cross it to not disturb the people and the people that live in the house where the sidewalk is at.
- her you mention John again- maybe move this into that first pargraph  

 In the video" Stories From The Street" it is a video that shows you what actually happens to some people he live in the streets. it tells you there story, there life's.

-it seems like the focus/position of your paper is how negative stereotypes of the homeless can influence how we as individuals feel and interact with the homeless and for you John's story and your own personal experience are examples of that 
-clarify this and develop it more